!!! Trapped In Life !!!
Saturday, September 06, 2008
~~... iN EssencE ...~~
Where does the smoke go which i flow?
Where does the rings go which i blow?
Wandering in the darkness...
Why doesn't it comes for one last show?
Where does the image go
Even before it gets painted?
Lost in the realm
Where do i land before getting fainted?
Where does the dusk go before it arrives?
Where does the sun go before it shines?
Where does my psyche go before i light ?
Where does my vision go before i sight?
Where does the love go
before it takes birth?
Where does the pain go
before we get hurt?
I say
The rings comes back to you
The smoke hits hard till YOUR last show
The image endures into the colors
Before it gets painted
You land somewhere inside yourself
Before YOU get fainted
The dusk hides behind in the SUN
waiting for its phase
Your psyche prevails inside you
Till you showcase
Your vision gets depleted till YOU realize
The love suffocates inside till your frozen
The pain awaits inside for love to awaken..!!
I repeat
Its all inside and just embarks when its right..!! :)
P.S. - Spare me I am horrible at poetry..:P
Where does the rings go which i blow?
Wandering in the darkness...
Why doesn't it comes for one last show?
Where does the image go
Even before it gets painted?
Lost in the realm
Where do i land before getting fainted?
Where does the dusk go before it arrives?
Where does the sun go before it shines?
Where does my psyche go before i light ?
Where does my vision go before i sight?
Where does the love go
before it takes birth?
Where does the pain go
before we get hurt?
I say
The rings comes back to you
The smoke hits hard till YOUR last show
The image endures into the colors
Before it gets painted
You land somewhere inside yourself
Before YOU get fainted
The dusk hides behind in the SUN
waiting for its phase
Your psyche prevails inside you
Till you showcase
Your vision gets depleted till YOU realize
The love suffocates inside till your frozen
The pain awaits inside for love to awaken..!!
I repeat
Its all inside and just embarks when its right..!! :)
P.S. - Spare me I am horrible at poetry..:P
1 Comments:
Come on buddy...
Tat's awesome.. the thoughts... their flow and the poetry tat contains them.
I like the line abt love...
The love suffocates inside till your frozen
The pain awaits inside for love to awaken..!!
True to the core. Not all can relate to it.. Only those who hav been in love n lost it smwhere...
Also, the one abt.. we land somewhere inside ourself...before we faint... Insightful!
Your poetry has life! It has d questions , the suspense, the hopes, the longing and the answers ofcourse in the end.. as Life does.
Nice to c ur blog updated.
Keep it flowing buddy.
U have become a philosopher yaar... D I Say.. reflects as if a thinker ponders upon the mystery of life n comes bk with his answers only to enthrall d humble audience (us) yet again!
All Hail!
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